DH Cover Illustration - WIP

Sketchwork/WIP - part of a cover illustration I'm doing for my story Dark Horizons. Created using non-photo blue pencil on copy paper. I think I'm going to redo the pose if I can, but there's a lot still left to go into the overall picture so I might get lazy and just not even try. *shrug*

Comments and critique would be super-nice at this point because I can still change stuff, thanks!